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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Rustling touched a bent blade of an idea whistling over ground, to caress wildness and vision... ~borrowed words~ I now return them to you In heartbeat of two as one, A multitude of shades blending As blades of grass kept bending Then reaching upward Caressing a midnite sun And late into the silent night I whisper: Whistle your words to me, my love, Caress the wildness, embrace the vision, For the essence of all eternity Resides within the power of Love’s domain, Transcending all known barriers, Even as those yet unseen fall away From whatever walls did separate us And you know Yes, you know That within that rustling blade of grass I sat silently for so very long, Becoming so fused with the Earth I nearly forgot I was born of Waters deep, Unaware the rising waters were my own weep. And you know, Yes, you know. You know. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
omg Kacy, I felt a shiver run through me when I read this.... absolutely lovely writing, one of my very favourite of yours now for certain. HUGS for such a touching and beautiful write! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
beautiful writing, Kacy! I sat silently for so very long, Becoming so fused with the Earth I nearly forgot I was born of Waters deep, Unaware the rising waters were my own weep WOW! misc |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
thanking you, Donna, and Cathy this one is...a special write |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
This is beautiful. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Beautiful words, extraordiary feeling... Borrowed? Not. TD |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You inspire me to write, once again! 1derful piece! By the way, we don't take too kindly to rustling, in the grass or any place else, in Texas  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
thanks to each loper? then perhaps for Texans, wrestling?  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
truly outstanding Kacy! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Inspired write, Kacy....that last couple of stanza.....pulling my heart strings....jo |
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