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Open Poetry #38

Sunday mourning

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

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0 posted 2006-08-20 11:08 AM

               mourning dove
                  church bells
               a ticking clock
                  a barking dog

               otherwise so quiet here
               that
               thoughts of you fill my head
               and my ears ring with it

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

1 posted 2006-08-20 01:03 PM

feeling the quiet with you~~

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2006-08-20 01:17 PM

I can relate, but unfortunately..it is my
ears ringing...always do when it is quiet.
Well said Kraw..

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

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3 posted 2006-08-20 02:28 PM

M,

Thanks, and good luck tomorrow.

e

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

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4 posted 2006-08-20 02:31 PM

Magnus,

Yes, I know about that problem, so I try to turn it. What else can one do?

e

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

5 posted 2006-08-21 12:05 PM

Well done!
I love it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

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The Southwest

6 posted 2006-08-22 01:32 AM

quietly sad
well said

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