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the quell
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0 posted 2006-08-14 08:22 PM


This Month's Prophet

Lonely as the sea in its sighing solitude,
He meanders slumberous city sidewalks,
That have never before seemed quite so...
Cold.
Bitter. Frost splinters, crunching under aimless feet.
Cobweb memories drifting, sifting, slipping with the silken winter's flurry.
His mind cherishes nothing,
And he kneels before none:
~bUT tHe EphEMeRaL aLtaR oF tHe iNFiDeL~
Each shifting current of thought floats away, writhing in glacial ribbons of smoke,
Tapering on haunted moth-wings into a wounded urban sky.
~eVEn tHe hEArtLeSs WaYS oF HeAVeN dO SOmEtIMeS bLEeD~
A map of furrowed lines anoints his face,
Painted by Time - that invisible assailant,
And secret Saviour of humanity.
Saw-edged horizons dance and shimmer as they fade,
Sinking beneath the world's midnight rim,
Like Noah's Ark departing.
Longing for the touch of destiny, he watches,
Like a rat, left behind to drown,
~jUSt aNoTHeR pApER CuP, sUrFInG tHE wAvES oF RuIN~
Figures pass him by,
A thousand strangers' red pulsing hearts, unable to pierce his private sphere,
A faceless mist of souls, drifting ever on,
Yet they are his children, in so many ways...
The fat and pleasant seeds he has sown and nourished.
~yET WhAT dOEs a ShEPherD tRUlY cARe fOR hIs FLoCk?~
His past is a cloaked and hooded diablo, an abomination beneath the sun,
A twisted, obsidian soul that casts no shadow,
And is best left...
Shrouded.
He awaits his silent reckoning,
His absolution.
Though there is no Eden fair enough...
~nO dUNgEoN dEEp eNOuGh~
No chains to contain such obedient sedition.
Beyond salvation, and immune to damnation,
With a smile like splintered ice,
This Month's Prophet shambles, surprisingly swift,
~fOR hE sTOLe tHE WiND fROm bENeAtH tHe wINgS oF a dOVe...~
Into the night.


They aren't flaps; they're my face!
                               - The Mighty Boosh

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2006-08-14 09:34 PM


quell
You are a very literate poet, but I think you know it. I have found the common symbol
pans like gold hard to find and I am still a poor man, that is only monitarily. LOL

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2006-08-14 09:45 PM


"Each shifting current of thought floats away, writhing in glacial ribbons of smoke,
Tapering on haunted moth-wings into a wounded urban sky."
Well done! Nice imagery.
You've really made 'thoughts' writhe.

seraphin
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Michigan
3 posted 2006-08-14 10:03 PM


"for he stole the wind from beneath the wings of a dove"-
truly one of those lines everyone says sighingly to themselves "I wish I wrote that!"
wonderful imagery. Just an excellent write.

Sandra

The Lady
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The Southwest
4 posted 2006-08-14 11:32 PM



what Sandra said
and "what does a shephard
truly care for his flock"
and all the rest of it too...

magnificent!

LeeJ
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5 posted 2006-08-15 08:35 AM


couldn't highlight a favorite, as the entire poem gifts one outstanding line after another...this was remarkable....
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