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0 posted 2006-08-13 06:57 PM


Glare
By: Noah Eaton
8/1/05

The dream was always running ahead of me,
you’ll feel less with every little bit more you see,
tonight I feel revirginated staring up into space,
feeling like I haven’t seen anything...

...your forehead was kissed by firefly sonata,
made you a precious day-glo tiara,
each blinking star between each young kiss,
challenging the Fermi paradox...


...I feel as though I’ve lost my legs,
but, baby, you make me brave enough to go ahead…

...up and away…

...up and away…
Ooohhh, it’s love at first sight,
every time I see you…

...gleaming in the glittering glare…
Chocolate daisies must have called your name,
tutored with mignonettes in the summer rain,
foo fighters flicker like opaline snow owls,
groping the world in a snowblink of involuntary praise...

...from the touch of your fingertips,
we’re sparkling amidst this total solar eclipse,
there’s polyphony between every heartbeat,
and in this moment there’s pure clairsentience...


...I feel as though I’ve lost my legs,
but, baby, you make me brave enough to go ahead...


...up and away...

...up and away...


Ooohhh, it’s love at first sight,
every time I see you...

...gleaming in the glittering glare...


Ooooohhhh...

ooooohhhh...

ooooohhhh...

...it’s when two look at each other
beyond three winks,
that it all becomes a miracle,
sweet darling...


Ooohhh, it’s love at first sight,
ooohhh, it’s love at first sight,
every time I see you…

...gleaming in the glittering glare...


Infinity’s in the palm of your hand,
but forever rests in the stardust of each eyelash,
each hot youthful tear I will collect,
lathering your face in glare with my heart’s content...


"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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1 posted 2006-08-14 11:25 AM


Noah, have you been smitten

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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2 posted 2006-08-15 10:01 PM


Enjoyed...James
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3 posted 2006-08-16 06:49 AM


Truly uplifting.
Enjoyed muchly, Noah.

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4 posted 2006-08-18 10:41 AM


Good morning, Noah.

"Infinity’s in the palm of your hand,"

~ and in your inkwell.

...and as a palmist, I especially enjoyed and agreed with that line!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

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5 posted 2006-08-18 12:58 PM


Noah,

I'm sure that the cosmos trickled down star dust smiles upon your love smitten stature and most certainly heartily applauded your stellar performance here.

Again, enjoyed reading and God bless.

-Bob

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