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White Space |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
White Space Something concealed from my eyes Provokes in tincture of iodine zeal Chaos that flashes slotted views Callusing my mind as I attempt revision Pouring out etched remnants of together That life is boundless, an adventure Thwarted only by the limits self imposed Speaking not of consideration or compassion But by doing and feeling, craft and fabric Religion is a surrogate thread to destiny Calligraphy or doodle of whim Written in verse, or prose to ponder Sent forth preemptive of an actual step Where light fondles the horizon slowly Guarding footstep and precipice alike Here I write, regarding distance as time Leaving traces of myself upon a page Making promises unbroken and barriers un-felled Yet when I read the wisdom of my seeking Here I find white space where I intended love Copyright Kkh 8/15/06 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ With thoughts like this - 'light fondles the horizon slowly' - you color the white space poetically perfect~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Where light fondles the horizon slowly Guarding footstep and precipice alike Here I write, regarding distance as time Leaving traces of myself upon a page Making promises unbroken and barriers un-felled Yet when I read the wisdom of my seeking Here I find white space where I intended love TD: Profound words you have penned here. Love can be construed in the interpretation: Where nothing said indeed is gain, if it is truly understood. As in: “Love means never having to say you’re sorry.” Good to read you again. Beautiful write TD. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
"Leaving traces of myself upon a page" I love this. I read the love in the white spaces, don't you? Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
This is a lovely write and I see love all over it. Hugs Kimberly |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
I have read this 3 times and still find more beauty in it, then the read before...craftily penned! |
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