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What About Love ?
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What About Love ? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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What About Love ~*Marge Tindal*~ What about love is so compelling as to send a heart rappelling into the depths of another ? What about love in a moment so weak as to leave another with no words to speak knowing that silence is sometimes golden ? What about love that captivates the thoughts of another in anticipate of the foreverly moment of entwine ? What about love is eternally surreal as to leave another with the feel that they are stronger because of you ? What about love feels so right that when dawn swallows the moon of the night it finds you wrapped in the arms of one who makes you glow anew ? You ... you, are total love to me as I try to be total love to you~ ~Bet you can't guess that this one is for my Tweetie, Bill~ Babe ? You are about love ... my love~  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
IWIHWT ~ and was able to present the love of my life with such words!!! Loverly to the max, Romantic One!  Loving Light, EO  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You are right, we would have never guessed who it was for... well done MT!! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...you are such a romantic (HOT!) soul...I'll bet Bill's going to love this! |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Total enveloping love in your passionate poem, Marge. Your point is well made in the loveliest way. Rae |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
That golden silence... when hearts don't need the words to convey their overflowing... *S* Some memories are lush enough to sustain through any drought... thank you for turning me to these. *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lucky you two  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem, Marge. What you two have is spectacular! misc |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
whoops--meant to save this! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Having met both of you, Marge makes these poems toBill all the more real and special to read...what a wonderful love you two share... ~hugs to you both~ M |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Good to read about love without the whining and whimpering. Love should be fun and laughter. martyjo |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
What about love feels so right that when dawn swallows the moon of the night it finds you wrapped in the arms of one who makes you glow anew ? it's so nice to see, romance, strength, true love alive in couples as you... Bravo! |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Such a wonderful display of your love for Bill. You two are very blessed Marge. Hugs Kimberly |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Glad to see you're still on your're honeymoon Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
well you didn't have to tell me who it was for Marge... the love you share is incredible... beautiful poem |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
How beautiful and great are thou. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
beautiful.....it is wonderful to see love alive and thriving |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is beautiful. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
The rope breaks. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Marge, I'm with Linda, I have been such a fan of your poetry and haven't been on PIP for such a long time, it was a real treat to jump in here today and find this one. It took my breath away!!! I love the way this feels... I had to read it aloud. Added to my library Sherry |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KindFriends~ Thank you all ...~ Rat~ Oh, but even if it should ... the depths of his heart would be such a nice place to fall~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
The kind of love for which everyone should strive. So very romantic, Marge. Love, Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joyce~ Yes, to strive ... and sometimes we are fortunate enough to seep into the heart of another and homestead there~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Marge, it does make you glow! What is it about love that opens a poem and pours out music, kisses the heart and leaves a smile on your reader's faces? I have to admit, I'm sighing here. How inricate that word Love is. To love is to evolve... and that is a very interesting phenomenal word, too.   Hugs, Klassy |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Whatever it is about love it seems to have wrapped itself around you both and that's a most wonderful and rare occurrence. Everything good flows from love as do your words. Thanks for this look into love even though I still don't know exactly what it is - perhaps it's just enough to know that "it is". |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KlassyLady~ "What is it about love that opens a poem and pours out music, kisses the heart and leaves a smile on your reader's faces?" Klassy reply~ Thanks OWL ...~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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