Open Poetry #38 |
The Ghost I Know |
Lisey Junior Member
since 2006-08-27
Posts 36UK (Wales) |
The Ghost I Know Hey You little girl in the corner cant see you any longer where have you gone are you out playing keep hearing your voice your delicate singing where are you running too? why the rush? am i really that scary? why do you watch me brushing my hair sometimes i forget that your standing there you always smile, make me feel so safe, where do you live let me see your place!?! Aww dont run away again i only want to talk come on take my hand lets go for a walk! why cant i feel your hand when i want to be near some times your hazy never REALLY clear! you always show up when im feeling so sad making me happy feeling really glad i just want a cuddle you make me warm and free come on little girl, come over to me! i lost my daughter you remind me of her the same smiling mouth and the ringlets in your hair you seem to appear when i miss her the most but hear me little girl i realise your her ghost so dont be afraid to talk when im all alone we'll play pretend lets talk on the phone just let me say goodbye give me a chance to close the door, but i wake in the morning and i cant see you anymore yet i feel complete from just seeing you that one last time the end of the chapter as the grand father clock does chime! good night my little girl!. Written by Lisey Wilkes [This message has been edited by Lisey (09-01-2006 02:12 PM).] |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Beautiful ! I read this several days ago and it has remained with me. I have returned to it several times...in hopes that others may have come upon it. It is far too powerful and touching to remain hidden... back to the top. |
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Lisey Junior Member
since 2006-08-27
Posts 36UK (Wales) |
wow thankyou!! - this does actually make me cry when i too read it!! your comment was touchy and rewarding |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lisa~ A very moving piece ... heartfelt emotions brimming~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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