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dreamdc
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since 2005-11-11
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Utah, USA

0 posted 2006-08-13 12:56 PM


As I was walking down the road
Running late for work as usual
The stench of the hot summer morning around me
"Its already 87 degree's and it's only 8 in the morning" I tell myself
Lordy, I should have grabbed a drink, or something to eat.
What a great way to start a sluggish day of work.
And I'm broke.
I don't have a dollar in my pocket.
Left everything at home
as I was rushing out the door.
Call it coincidence
Call it pure luck
But someone heard my struggles
Even something as small as being thirsty
I came upon 4 wadded up dollar bills
on the ground
it made me stop and remember
I am blessed
And someone is looking out for me
Thank you.
It was very much appreciated.


© Copyright 2006 Danielle - All Rights Reserved
aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2006-08-13 02:51 AM


I like your style.

artexeres
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since 2006-08-01
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south africa
2 posted 2006-08-13 05:07 AM


Well done, for remembering, a reminder to us all.
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2006-08-13 06:59 AM


"you are blessed" and someone else is wondering why they are not and where they lost "their" money...

just a thought
M

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