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he lays her down (charcoal man and his lady)
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he lays her down (charcoal man and his lady) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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charcoal man turns dream sheets wipes lady’s bare feet with cool lays her back shadow hair floats on pillow he reaches to touch push back palm of his hand wears white scar gift from her anger congo memory wraps itself around her mind bites she whimpers brings the white to red lips lays kiss where she wounded him eye to eye she whispers him I fell where the demon lies my heart sore told me lay him low yet I craved you with my soul with my holy soul I know darlin’ I know hush now he moves scar warm to place she dreams it she is hushed |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You had me leaning in and reading ... I love them. I just love them. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
morning... a new cup of coffee and ...you yummy |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
whiser of scar on trembling places does the warm chill when the basta strums sinsual work lady one |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
Lady, ya make me wanna purrrr  just yum! ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wanna purr? Oh shoot...just do it! Excellent reading, Lady! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you aziza I love them too they keep me awake with their story morning Helen glad they flavored your coffee oh yes Stranger the warm chills when the basta strums thank you purr Sheli I sure do thank you so much Karilea vandana thank you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kate~ It is such a pleasure to see a poet handle soft, sensual thoughts in such a dignified and stirring manner~ I felt this was such a delicate read~ THANK YOU~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
hushed for but a while longing cannot be contained craving satisfied Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much for your kind words Marge  craving cannot be satisfied wisely said Dr. Love |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you, James. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Charcoal Man and his Lady have come into my heart and made a home. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you aziza I'm glad you like them |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am loving this series, so very much! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Gentle Spirit more to come... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Your touch of sensuality brings to simmer the bloods of many...well done Lady. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I will be waiting and looking for more!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much Barry  Gentle Spirit... |
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Tempest Member
since 2006-04-28
Posts 247dont eat paint chips!!!! |
ummm......you dont make sense at all.... This is the only life you have, so live it to be remembered |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
laughing... I don't usually make sense when these two are around... |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
i thought it was a nice read Swinging the Dead in this Free Fall you call life, Swinging the Dead on a Deathride |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Snowflake! |
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Neotec Member
since 2006-08-22
Posts 112 |
hushed by day, alive at night. the dark and light is good to see. a lust so held, yet given into, with a deamon in check and heaven above. so lovely with words and the light and dark : ) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I think we need to keep our eyes on the demon Neotec thank you for your reply... |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Ah, who needs to make sense. Sensual and sense so alike and so far apart. I'll just enjoy the sensation of the sensual on my mind and worry about sense another day. Wonderful, Kate. I am so glad that they shared their story with you so you could share it with us. A |
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