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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2006-08-11 10:09 AM

Mixing up present reality

Can we?

Lets try, huh?

Songs of infected humor

reflecting

crematoriums

Insinuating sweetness

Among

burning ruins

Stays alone on the streets

Blood run & infested

Used up by permission

Is emotional the imagined one?

Meters propel some soul of “might ends”

Encountering the history of existence

How Weary it must be?

What I wanted was “ground time”

Seemingly innocent

Like banana bread

I’m a nothing pedestrian

That you wouldn’t ordinarily notice

Yet to deny a holiday dinner

Imagine, every thing that wouldn’t be said

We can take an airplane back to college

We’re human beings using up human rights

Articulating insecurities

Tonight I’ll pray and ask

“Where is God?”

Has my ground time been put to death?

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

1 posted 2006-08-11 10:21 AM

We have....only what we make, and in large part, only what we make and give away. Ground time shall be mine today, Manhattan Beach, watching my grown-up son play sand volleyball (for money now)....and building memories of that, of sun, of sand, of family, of life.

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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2006-08-11 10:59 AM

1derful!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2006-08-11 01:35 PM

LeeJ
I think the question contains the answer.
Good morning sweet.

XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

4 posted 2006-08-11 01:56 PM

Boppa Ooo Mow Mow
::smiles::
Bird is the word
:: bows ::

(((LeeJ)))

poettothecars
Senior Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

5 posted 2006-08-13 12:11 PM

words to ponder over, and worth saying I did stop off the read them

a poet who cares

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2006-08-13 03:14 PM

"Where is God?"

There be no need for you to ask this question. You, Lovely Lee, know the answer.

God's Loving Light,
Linda

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2006-08-13 04:30 PM

Pedestrian, maybe... Nothing? Never!! *S*

With your pen, dear lady, you leave ordinary far behind... to the benefit of us all. *S*

the quell
Member

since 2006-07-19

Posts 144
Liverpool, UK

8 posted 2006-08-13 06:36 PM

These lines really affected me: 'Insinuating sweetness/Among/burning ruins'.
LeeJ, I find your words enchanting. You have true talent

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