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Who Are You ?
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Who Are You ? |
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artexeres Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 156south africa |
Am I the man that’s standing in this hollow, full, yet empty space? a circle in a square and he does not have a face what is found now has it really lost its place Confusion rules is that not such a sorry disgrace as you are always in a hurry with a lot of time to waste you know where to go yet you never find the place you enjoy living slow yet you hurry and make haste you need confined place so you live in outer space you need proof and evidence yet you don’t have a trace you like simple rules yet you create for yourself a maze you need to pay attention yet you are always in a daze you like stability yet what you touch you tend to faze you are the most serious yet all you do is play this you do at nigh time when it is meant for the day everyone else is mad you are sane you say well I guess this is mans ignorant way. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love your play on words... M |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
I fully agree. Nicely done. |
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artexeres Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 156south africa |
i thank you both, very much for reading and commenting. |
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