Open Poetry #38 |
Cherish the Word |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"Cherish is the word" the thoughts I heard, as the ride home seemed like forever, and a long ago song returned the memories of a fonder yesteryear... Raising the emotions to a higher level, the once casualty of time is a battle to keep love alive, the only gift to awaken the secrets that are treasures of the heart... Pillowed thoughts follow me: words to cherish, dreams to sustain. Softspoken until silent, holding the key that unlocks my tomorrow-song. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I love the thought of the "tomorrow song". Thank you for this when I needed to read it most. aziza |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Oh, what that old music will do to our senses... even goes so far as to bring back smells... Enjoyed this, m'friend. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my..now that special song will play in my head all day. Wonderful write Maureen... Indeed..a tomorrow song... Hugs~Nancy |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thant "tomorrow song" blends so well with my yesterday song. I'll just be glad when we can have our many tommorrows. Hugs, Ethel |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Cherish is the word I woudl use for this piece |
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artexeres Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 156south africa |
a good write, yes "cherish the word" a golden write about hope, dreams and memories, allways feeling that the golden time for humanity lays in our tomorrows aongs, thorougly enjojed. |
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David D Jerald Member
since 2006-08-07
Posts 74Tucson, Arizona |
The Battle to keep love alive aaah that is truly the mother of all battles is it not? Very good I liked your poem very much M I'm brand new here but will keep my eye out for your poems. Dave |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
It is always when there is a lul in time we think of the song of tomorrow... Nice write. Kristabell "Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
aziza, thank you for reading... hope it helped. Decaflame ...I couldn't get the song out of my head..it was perfect for my ride home Nancy, I hope you have a wonderful vacation... Ethel, yes a yesterday's song tomorrow...a nice blend~~ "I" I cherish your responses ..thank you artexeres, thank you for stopping by to read and respond, I appreciate your kind words Dave, indeed it is a battle especially as we age...( by the way I love your profile at your site..and we are of the same age...) Welcome to pip~~ M(Maureen) Kristabell, I have no lull in time...too busy trying to catch up on what I have been missing ..thanks for the read |
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