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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia 
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Am I ever lonely or is it in my head, Does the sun rotate or is it really dead. Is the moon really made of cheese just like the TV said? I think I live a life of dreams, insanity and made up lies, It takes a lot to make my bed to smile or to laugh And today is just another day where my emotion dies too fast. |
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perfect stranger Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 54on cloud 9 |
love this, love all your poems,my son thought the moon was made of cheese until he was 8 he always said he would like to go to the moon,when his daughter was born he wanted to call her moon but her mother said no,she was called Brooke as in a small stream of water,sun moon stars and water,just having a laugh to myself about my son thinking the moon was made of cheese, love the poem. |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
It seems as if you put some lasting emotion into this, you know? Nice write. Kristabell "Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life." |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Thankyou both very much for your comments. I am 16 now and 10 years ago i remember watching a bananas and pyjamas episode about the moon being made of cheese and then when my mum told me it wasnt i remember crying for hours in my room, Such devestation. |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
"Am I ever lonely or is it in my head, Does the sun rotate or is it really dead." I really liked this |
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