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ballajosue
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Ca, Us

0 posted 2006-08-28 04:11 AM



Paper, Pencil.
Pencil, Fingers.
Fingers, Hand.
Hand, Arm.

Arm, Body.
Body, Soul.
Soul. Heart.

Heart, Masterpiece.
Masterpiece, Art.
Art, you.

     

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Interloper
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2006-08-28 11:15 AM


I love it!
So very well done!
~*~
it is natural
it follows logically
art, masterpiece, you

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2006-11-07 09:49 AM


The title is perfect for this bit of poetic perfection!

Poetically succinct!

Loving Light,
EA

Pilgrimage
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3 posted 2006-11-07 03:12 PM


Oh, excellent.  I just got directed to this one from Interloper's ....logic, and I'm glad I did.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2006-11-08 10:35 AM


thanks to 'loper for pointing to this
gem, this art of heart

The Lady
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The Southwest
5 posted 2006-11-08 10:00 PM




I also followed 'loper's finger
and found this treat!
delightful


Martie
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6 posted 2006-11-09 11:15 AM


This is indeed connected!  Very much enjoyed!
ballajosue
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7 posted 2006-11-22 04:25 AM


thanks alot guys! late boomer i guess! lol =)

        

TNTarzan
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8 posted 2010-05-08 07:22 AM


Nice!
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