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AlexanderPoetry
Junior Member

since 2006-07-31

Posts 30

0 posted 2006-08-03 03:36 PM

  A Love Without Good-byes

  by  Alexander

A lifetime filled with cheating hearts, all echo from my past.
The love so true's and I love you's, each one was meant to last.
So fine this line of sharing, built with honesty and trust.
Each vow now left inside my head, to slowly gather dust.

I struggle to tomorrow, searching hope, yet walking blind.
While broken dreams and silent screams play re-runs in my mind.
I try to shake each past mistake, and meet what lies ahead.
While hearing cold reminders of these promises once said.

It's hard to feel whats wrong from real when shadows dim the light.
I close my eyes and dream a dream of heaven every night.
Is all I know, this history I hold, a guiding hand ?
These scars I show, a lesson that I yet don't understand.

Another day awaits me, in this life I call my own.
A cruel delay frustrates me, as I face this world alone.
Let words once said and tears long shed, rest peaceful in this heart,
I know the pain of love in vain will always play its part.

Each night I wait for slumber, so that once again I steal,
A moments bliss with lovers lost, I know cannot be real.
With open arms I welcome such new dreams that may arise,
I only pray to find one day, a love... without good-byes.


copyright:Alexander:March:2006.

divine chaos
Senior Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

1 posted 2006-08-03 03:55 PM

this is just so touching
and sad and beautiful
I relate to it well

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2006-08-03 04:02 PM

Anyone who can write like that is deserving of a love with no good-byes.

Beautifully and lyrically penned.

Loving Light,
EA

Billy_tha_Kidd
Junior Member

since 2006-07-17

Posts 27
Indiana USA

3 posted 2006-08-03 06:19 PM

agrees with Earth Angel

elisalie16
Member

since 2006-07-12

Posts 118
new jersey

4 posted 2006-08-03 10:32 PM

i agree with all of the afore comments. beautiful, sad, but very touching.

AlexanderPoetry
Junior Member

since 2006-07-31

Posts 30

5 posted 2010-11-11 03:05 AM

For anyone who cares to view, a video has now been produced for this poem. It can be viewed at the URL below..
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qNRO2Ox-rzU

yours,

Alexander.

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