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Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

0 posted 2006-08-31 06:23 AM

In wee hours of morning,
earth sails a fitful sea,
merely mindful fragments
of stars and night and me.

Space lies a hollow vagrant,
the eye of ancient storm,
empty now of yesterday,
tomorrow not yet formed.

Far horizons find his sun
rising to meet my sea,
east to west holds the moon,
tide stirs old memory.

Footsteps fade to linger,
wade moments in my head,
float golden scents of summer
around my feather bed.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-08-31 08:42 AM

Footsteps fade to linger,
wade moments in my head,
float golden scents of summer
around my feather bed.

sounds like a comfy mattress topper to me...
(wink)

this was like a scent of summer

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2006-08-31 08:50 AM

Klassy,
"Footsteps fade to linger,
wade moments in my head,
float golden scents of summer
around my feather bed."

That's as klassy as you can get.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2006-08-31 11:20 AM

1derful write

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

4 posted 2006-08-31 03:28 PM

Lee, I wished to be in that feather bed at 3:30 a.m. when this poem wafted in... LOL
My grandson (12) was sleep walking and I kept watch for a while to keep him from going out the door.

~~~~~~~~~

Sy, ...love those smiles! TY

~~~~~~~~

Int'l, Glad to have you drop in!

TY

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2006-08-31 07:36 PM

KlassyLady~
This is just so lovely ... I could burrow down and get real comfy~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2006-08-31 09:47 PM

Very well conceived and great flow. Makes
us all want to settle down and snooze a
little bit.

Neotec
Member

since 2006-08-22

Posts 112

7 posted 2006-08-31 09:59 PM

Where my bed
Lay down my sleepy head

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

8 posted 2006-09-01 12:50 PM

"Far horizons find his sun
rising to meet my sea,
east to west holds the moon,
tide stirs old memory"

you have a lovely way with words Klassy

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

9 posted 2006-09-01 05:01 AM

"In wee hours of morning,
earth sails a fitful sea,
merely mindful fragments
of stars and night and me."

What a moment...

reading it brings a calming effect.

Greatly enjoyed.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

10 posted 2006-09-01 06:13 AM

"In wee hours of morning,
earth sails a fitful sea,
merely mindful fragments
of stars and night and me."

Yes, lovely!

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

11 posted 2010-09-07 02:46 PM

What an odd feeling to find my own thoughts forgotten here, as if a stranger had dropped a crumpled note of dreams in a puddle for me to retrieve today. ~ KL

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