Open Poetry #38 |
Perchance to Dream |
Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
In wee hours of morning, earth sails a fitful sea, merely mindful fragments of stars and night and me. Space lies a hollow vagrant, the eye of ancient storm, empty now of yesterday, tomorrow not yet formed. Far horizons find his sun rising to meet my sea, east to west holds the moon, tide stirs old memory. Footsteps fade to linger, wade moments in my head, float golden scents of summer around my feather bed. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Footsteps fade to linger, wade moments in my head, float golden scents of summer around my feather bed. sounds like a comfy mattress topper to me... (wink) this was like a scent of summer |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Klassy, "Footsteps fade to linger, wade moments in my head, float golden scents of summer around my feather bed." That's as klassy as you can get. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful write Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Lee, I wished to be in that feather bed at 3:30 a.m. when this poem wafted in... LOL My grandson (12) was sleep walking and I kept watch for a while to keep him from going out the door. ~~~~~~~~~ Sy, ...love those smiles! TY ~~~~~~~~ Int'l, Glad to have you drop in! TY |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KlassyLady~ This is just so lovely ... I could burrow down and get real comfy~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very well conceived and great flow. Makes us all want to settle down and snooze a little bit. |
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Neotec Member
since 2006-08-22
Posts 112 |
Where my bed Lay down my sleepy head |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Far horizons find his sun rising to meet my sea, east to west holds the moon, tide stirs old memory" you have a lovely way with words Klassy |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
"In wee hours of morning, earth sails a fitful sea, merely mindful fragments of stars and night and me." What a moment... reading it brings a calming effect. Greatly enjoyed. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"In wee hours of morning, earth sails a fitful sea, merely mindful fragments of stars and night and me." Yes, lovely! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
What an odd feeling to find my own thoughts forgotten here, as if a stranger had dropped a crumpled note of dreams in a puddle for me to retrieve today. ~ KL |
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