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she boude' now (charcoal man and his lady)
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she boude' now (charcoal man and his lady) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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lady on front stoop poker in half moon fingers breaks each single window pane rage flying charcoal man sittin’ on heels across street Panama white as bone cigar arrivistes point sneer leave her be lady trying to work out a problem don’ preshate you laughin’ at her he chuckles deep I’ll be damned laugh shakes head breakin’ a lady like breakin' a mule she shatters last piece of glass drops poker leans on knees hair sweated cotton skimpy stuck to breast charcoal man jaunts to porch arm around shoulders lady drops weary head ah bébé don be couyon some more lady leans comment je v'as faire he lifts chin kisses cry mouth leads her through screen door flies gather buzzing comment faites at broken windows |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady one..she is lovely here..with the fragile around..enjoyed her |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Knew he'd come back...  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Such a totally captivating series~ Soooooooooo enjoyable~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
He can't resist the lady and her charms, he HAS to come back. NICEEEE |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
what a story...this is an attention holder... masterful write and series...thank you |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
I keep thinking that when I have the time, I will copy these all in a file on my desktop. A wonderful series, that I do wish I had the ability to do. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
yes Stranger fragile can be so lovely thank you he always comes back, huh, Karilea?  thank you so much Marge… makes you wonder who can’t leave whom Gentle Spirit thank you thank you LeeJ I appreciate your response thank you so much Sandra  |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This one just makes me sit in silence. I can feel her pain - and her need. And, I still like that charcoal man. A |
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