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XOx Uriah xOX
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0 posted 2006-08-03 01:49 PM



Wincher is my name
Wincher is a boy
Playing lots of games
Buying lots of toys
and video games.

Wincher goes to the market store
Gets a game and goes back home
Then he goes and buys somemore
He does not play his game alone
His bunny plays with him.

The bunny gives his dog a cat
The cat and puppy hug
The puppy gave the cat a bat
The cat gave the bat a bug
He ate it.

The cat gave the dog a bone
The cat and puppy kissed each other
The cat left the dog alone
and went and hugged his mother
Because he did.

                *

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Martie
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1 posted 2006-08-03 01:57 PM


Wonderful!!!
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2 posted 2006-08-03 02:15 PM


Larry~
You spill delightful four-year-old ink~

Charming little muser you have there~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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the quell
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3 posted 2006-08-03 02:42 PM


Very sweet! Enjoyed it much

They aren't flaps; they're my face!
                           - The Mighty Boosh

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2006-08-03 02:56 PM


Words spoken from a four year old and right into the heart of my inner child.

Simple, innocent ~ and totally charming!

XO
EA

aziza
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5 posted 2006-08-03 10:16 PM


Sometimes words are simply not necessary. All I know is I want a bunny!

aziza

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Tamarac Fla
6 posted 2006-08-04 02:58 PM


Uriah
"Because he did." A delight to read.

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7 posted 2006-08-04 06:15 PM


~smiling~ at the thought
enjoyed

M

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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2006-08-04 06:46 PM



You've been dealing out
some charmers, Larry...

keep up the good work!


The Lady
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9 posted 2006-08-06 01:25 AM




your four year old
is a pretty neat kid Uriah

love the way he writes


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