Open Poetry #38 |
Under the covers |
Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Fly-away, fly-away, fly-away, hair in my dry, so dry, South African air and long is the winter of discontent lingering so like a fly that won’t go from the sweetness of every dream. But under the covers of everyday the imposing fortress of mind’s hideaway never closes its doors to refugees from the pain of remembered love ~ and this like a chest stores memories all neatly laid out on the floor. Tip-toe between or kick them away or hold to a breast like mother to child but one and all cry, “Hold me, hold me” and I stand undecided sometimes. Walk and I do the so narrow aisles but always go back to the start to feel again you within and without and smile/cry, smile/cry, smile/cry _ and I wonder, I wonder, why, why, why, it catches my eye all the time. It must be gold glittering or lace fine woven and sheer but it’s only the fire of love’s desire burning, burning, in memory! Helen / 5 August 2006 |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Helen, I do like this one a bunch...it describes how those memories haunt so well...yes, they are like refugees...like that analogy, too. *hugs*....jo |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks, Jo. Well, in the scheme of things I guess it's better than being a refugee from a war-torn country so, could I say I'm "blessed"? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Helen....Anyone that has known love, is blessed, especially if the memory does not turn bitter. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"and I stand undecided sometimes" so perfect so human, Helen |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
This captured me with it's beauty. aziza |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you Martie, Kate, and aziza for the read. Maybe the summation of your comments could be - blessed is the so perfect and beautiful human. |
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