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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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willow of shimmer water bayou burrow down my sin boat's bow to the soft sighed of easy bring down your long gown belly down your dance skins and handfulls of a woman's willing let the boozoo ooze his soot and rub your conjurs on ol' creole as the bayou boy strums his metal hurry on down before you know the flo'da before you spend your thinking penn's on salty candy in tip toe plastic hurry on down your slow storm savory _____________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-03-2006 09:49 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There are some easy moving horizon scenes in here, sir... as always, enjoyable and smooth... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks ms sun, you bless me |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I always hurry on down to read your words and I am never disappointed! Again, I found a bit of magical. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I hear music in your "willows of shimmer water bayou"... Summertime When the Livin' is Easy, Blue bayou, and Witchy Woman. California Dreamin' about a Louisana Saturday Night? All with the one and only touch of Daark. |
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SusieQ Junior Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 40Michigan, USA |
I don't understand it all but I like it a lot. |
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perfect stranger Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 54on cloud 9 |
hurry on down your slow storm savory.loved this bit best. |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Not sure exactly what to say but... this is a good one! Kristabell "Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life." |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
I have always try to understand your poetries. but somehow they are beyond what i can grapse. lolx  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
susie, krista' and fng...something to do with zy-decco history..the context here is a proper lady stepping down into the bayou community to become involved in the conjuring of the music and mystery..boozoo is a well known zydeco star..thanks for the read ms's _____________ ps thanks for the review |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Storm watchin' does have its appeal. Got the music wrong, but the right idea. You make your own music ... and all... that... jazz! |
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