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. . . proclaim your love
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. . . proclaim your love |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
time passes quickly then it is too late to say what should have been said tell her of your love speak to him of caresses let there be no doubt are you devoted has adoration its place then proclaim your love Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You give great advise and that goes for all kinds of love, you can't express it to someone enough. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
to love and be loved for this gift eternal thanks to Heaven above. ringing silver chimes circle bands of crafted gold precious vows are told. ~It's so good to have you home Interloper~  |
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artexeres Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 156south africa |
Phew a true bit of wisdom, love should always be proclaimed,treat others as you feel you would desire to be treated and do we all not desire to be told, how special we are. love can never be expressed enough i have loved my lady for thirty one years and it only gets stronger we should all make love our great discourse. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Could it be? It is the Interloper. Cool. And great wisdom too. Well done. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
the mute made me remember, and this of yours, made me miss. You have written something that makes my soul ache. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love this poem and telling you so now, before it's too late ~ love your heart ~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Mysteria ~ Thank you, and I agree. Nancy ~ The Enchanted one blesses my offering artexeres ~ I agree and you said it well! Larry ~ Yes, it is I. I have been sharing a mountain top with Toerag seraphin ~ Thanks for the read. I think your first time to comment on my work. midnitesun ~ ... and I'm telling you 'thank you' before it is too late Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Short and sweet, well, almost bittersweet. This is very good advice, if you don't talk of your true feelings, how will they ever be known? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good thoughts, well placed.  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"time passes quickly then it is too late to say what should have been said" yes...no question! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It's caused me some grief... but I follow this advice... having learned the hard way what it is to live with words forever unheard. *S* Great write! *S* |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
You are right. Life is too short not to, nice write. Kristabell "Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Jenn ~ You are absolutely correct! Thanks for the read Sunshine ~ Thank you for the kind words Susan ~ SEA ebbs in and out of my life... suthern ~ Astute, as usual! Kristabell ~ Thank you so very much! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Sometimes we do not express our love because of the fear called rejection. But if rejection is your fate so be it.. their loss. Do not let shyness into the boundries of your life. Let family and friends know of your love for them because life is way to short. Your poem is a beauty. Hugs BonBon  |
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Catrina Member
since 2004-11-10
Posts 132 |
When too far gone cries Yet the seasons wonder why Matters must let go To the right be just Trust in love which you must Seasons must be so Ponder this only A bed sans a bed lonely Yet someone will grow ~*~ Thank you for the inspire. |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Wonderful write! so true I seldom proclaim the love I feel... My wife is very jealous and forbids me. Wonderful write! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
a lot said here in so few words; One could just kick themselves in hindsight when it's too late! Thanks for the reminder... misc |
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