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riverside causerie
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riverside causerie |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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roll the causerie into your ball wear it jagged in your ice will you mind my statue eyes when your sunday comes again possession is always mental but taken easily away with a highway offering or another skin that smiles the whispers sit behind glass and wag their mouths jealous in their skins that are inkless in the sun but the river runs for those who know how to feel water when it is still vapor and goodbyes are almost as good as a distant whispered hello _________________ daark |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Goodbyes linger longer... and cling to the hellos, in their lingering. wonderful write. Your ink carries the scent of blood, sweat, tears, wine and crank case drippings. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Xox...and a new road I didn't see before..thanks for the eyes |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
I really love your writing style the words just kinda swirl around me and I get lost in them for a moment ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
possession is always mental but taken easily away with a highway offering or another skin that smiles (yeah, the freakin weak so and so's soul robbers)ahhh hem, (scusa...if you please...(she inquires with a nod), while powdering her nose) (sighs) you do breath such sweet hello's, mouth to mouth, poet to poet... Morning D. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sheli, humble thanks for the eyes and the comments _____________ ms leej, shaking the hand on your shoulder (grin)..thanks lady friend |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
but the river runs for those who know how to feel water when it is still vapor You rock!  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms myst..thanks lady friend, I stoned..kidding |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS The river runs in you.  |
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the quell Member
since 2006-07-19
Posts 144Liverpool, UK |
once again I am mystified by your words |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Dark, you have a way of touching the corners of so many feelings at once. Once again, I am impressed at how you have made me think. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, thanks lil neighbor __________ friend quell, humble are my thanks to you ___________ sera ms, my smile is blessed by you here thank you |
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SusieQ Junior Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 40Michigan, USA |
You write so well. I love this. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suzieq thanks so much for the read |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
but the river runs for those who know how to feel water when it is still vapor and goodbyes are almost as good as a distant whispered hello ~*~ Yes, yes, and yes |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thanks for wading in |
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