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SusieQ
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since 2006-08-01
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Michigan, USA

0 posted 2006-08-03 01:12 AM



How cold is the rancor
Of love lost
Formerly lovely hearts
Harbor death knells
Silent lips move in mutters
Evil wishes float
As clouds of black flies

© Copyright 2006 Dianne - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2006-08-03 02:40 AM


welcome to Passions!
I enjoyed this first post...hope to read more

divine chaos
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon
2 posted 2006-08-03 07:56 AM


welcome to PiP

enjoyed your entry post
and look forward to reading
more of you!

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

Triskaidekaphobia
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...
3 posted 2006-08-03 08:32 AM


Ah, excellent, my kind of poetry!

I haven't replied to anything in a long time as I didn't trust myself not to be nasty about it (I've been in a very bad mood for about 6 months!) .... but this is just great.

I like where you're coming from.

"We all know Major Tom's a junkie"

Ashes to Ashes - David Bowie

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2006-08-03 09:32 AM



Welcome to Passions!  Please,
check your email for a very
special greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
5 posted 2006-08-03 11:03 AM


ms suzzQ, enjoyed the penbladenudity of this, please continue
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2006-08-03 11:32 AM


When a love is lost, it makes room for a new love to be found!

Welcome to pipTalk, Suzie Q! Enjoy reading us as we are sure to enjoy reading you!

Loving Light,
EA

the quell
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since 2006-07-19
Posts 144
Liverpool, UK
7 posted 2006-08-03 12:06 PM


ha haaa! Oh yes; lost love, my favourite. Masterfully written, my friend. And so very true. Particularly enjoyed the last couple of lines.

They aren't flaps; they're my face!
                           - The Mighty Boosh

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
8 posted 2006-08-03 06:01 PM




Excellent work, Susie.

Welcome.


SusieQ
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since 2006-08-01
Posts 40
Michigan, USA
9 posted 2006-08-04 12:42 PM



Wow! Thank you all. I'm surprised at so many answers.

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