Open Poetry #38 |
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Love Lost |
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SusieQ Junior Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 40Michigan, USA |
How cold is the rancor Of love lost Formerly lovely hearts Harbor death knells Silent lips move in mutters Evil wishes float As clouds of black flies |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welcome to Passions! I enjoyed this first post...hope to read more |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
welcome to PiP ![]() enjoyed your entry post and look forward to reading more of you! ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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Triskaidekaphobia Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 251In a state of disrepair... |
Ah, excellent, my kind of poetry! I haven't replied to anything in a long time as I didn't trust myself not to be nasty about it (I've been in a very bad mood for about 6 months!) .... but this is just great. I like where you're coming from. "We all know Major Tom's a junkie" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please, check your email for a very special greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suzzQ, enjoyed the penbladenudity of this, please continue |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
When a love is lost, it makes room for a new love to be found! ![]() Welcome to pipTalk, Suzie Q! Enjoy reading us as we are sure to enjoy reading you! ![]() Loving Light, EA |
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the quell Member
since 2006-07-19
Posts 144Liverpool, UK |
ha haaa! Oh yes; lost love, my favourite. Masterfully written, my friend. And so very true. Particularly enjoyed the last couple of lines. They aren't flaps; they're my face! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Excellent work, Susie. Welcome. |
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SusieQ Junior Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 40Michigan, USA |
Wow! Thank you all. I'm surprised at so many answers. |
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