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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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spiraltine unwindery around the roads to straight places where I retired her sinspins with softer rubber but she still loses it when the wet happens and that is usual unusually so mist be the rain or the musty side of dreams that waters her eyes as the last overflow from everywhere else and still she is metal running topless under paint bare edges cut the sun into star pattern slices of not so nice lovely voiceless til the eve when there are no gods that know the soul of her or the new day of her dreaming _______________ daark scribblenote: scootertin highway jabberish, back road to santa barbara |
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the quell Member
since 2006-07-19
Posts 144Liverpool, UK |
Sort of evocative and ghostly...although I can't say I understood it entirely. Nonetheless, a magical experience. You're a wonderful poet. You've gone wrong! You've gone wrong in your mind-tank! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Those backroads... gads... sigh. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend quell, humble thanks to you ______________ ms sunshine, old 192 just keeps on doin it, thanks lady friend |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
No gods to know her soul, but soul knows her gods in star patterned slices, and the even in quiet of Daark and daydreaming, mindspun shadows and blue sky, sun and rain: spangled lace somewhere under that glint of metal and tatoo.  ~ Klassy [This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (08-01-2006 11:58 PM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms kl...same page between the same lines thanks lady friend |
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SusieQ Junior Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 40Michigan, USA |
Dreamy. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Reading your poetry is like being caught in a web of words - a beautiful web that tantalizes as it holds me in place. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms susie q thanks for the eyes ___________ ms aziz..you make me smile, thanks so much for the read |
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