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Open Poetry #38

Talking Under Water

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-07-31 12:26 PM

Heads bending close as soft words swirl
in the deep green waves of thought
Our minds are shared, longing, strongly tugging
like riptides spinning emotions in the strong
current of our love
It seems as if we talk under water
in a world of comfort where you keep me safe
It seems as if we talk under water
kisses drifting on the backs of floating shells of pearl
There is a quiet, a stillness, a peace that covers us
with a knowledge that there is more, more, far more
to give and share, to take and cherish
as we float together in a world that blankets
us in the deep blue of a sea that can never divide
that can only continue to bring us closer as one.

aziza

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-07-31 07:20 PM

beautiful

brother stone
Junior Member

since 2006-01-25

Posts 28

2 posted 2006-08-02 09:29 AM

there is more, there is much much always always more. keep remembering that even though it is hard, and your love will be long.

lumpy oatmeal makes you crazy! you are funny! brother stone learns something now because he likes it best lumpy and he is crazy. thinking now, very thinking.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2006-08-02 09:31 AM

lovely poem

Triskaidekaphobia
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...

4 posted 2006-08-03 08:45 AM

Mmmmm, I like this, I like it a lot.

You have a fan boy! lol

"We all know Major Tom's a junkie"

Ashes to Ashes - David Bowie

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2006-08-05 04:14 AM

Enjoyed...James

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

6 posted 2006-08-07 06:08 AM

A unique description of intimacy and love.....

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2006-08-07 08:31 AM

interesting metaplay enjoyed it ms

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2006-08-07 08:51 AM

Very nice...much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

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