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Flick_the_poetess
New Member

since 2006-07-30

Posts 3
NSW, Australia

0 posted 2006-07-30 06:33 AM

Do not follow where the path may lead
For it is stifled and over used
The grass is dead
No flowers bloom
No birds call
Dead trees just loom

Do not follow where the path may lead
For you’ll just get stuck in traffic
The path is crammed
With ones so dull
So empty, so cold
Some just plain dead

Do not follow where the path may lead
For there’s nothing there to do
The path is clear
And mapped in ink
So there are no surprises left
For any who walk that trail

Do not follow where the path may lead
And save your self the toil
The pain, the stress and boredom
Go instead where there’s no path
And leave a trail
Of Your Own.

A poem by Flick (OYP)
Based on the quote:
"Do not follow where the path may lead.
Go instead where there is no path and leave a trail. "~ Ralph Waldo Emerson

¢À(OYP)¢À
¢¾¢¾www.youngpoetess.com¢¾¢¾

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2006-07-30 09:00 AM

Flick~
Welcome, Welcome to our halls of poetry~

I just visited your website and am SO impressed with your talent at creating a site for young poets~

I 'think' that at the age of 13, I was still trying to figure out a typewriter !

What creative talents are shared via this modern technology~

Enjoy your stay among us ... there are some talented folks here~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

2 posted 2006-07-30 09:34 AM

Welcome to Passions, Flick. Like Marge, I visited your website. First of all, it is quite professional in its design, and secondly, from the two poets I took time to read, you conduct yourselves far beyond the age of teens, and that is to be highly commended.

I look forward to reading more of your work. Invite your OYPs...they would be welcome here.

Edgy? Yes...but still standing...

divine chaos
Senior Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

3 posted 2006-07-30 11:26 AM

Flick, I haven't visited your site yet, but
I will be doing so at some point today
Your entry poem is very insightful
and was much enjoyed

Welcome to PiP
I look forward to seeing
more from you

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

Flick_the_poetess
New Member

since 2006-07-30

Posts 3
NSW, Australia

4 posted 2006-07-31 02:52 AM

Thanks for all your feedback and compliments!

I hope you enjoy the website and I'll try to post more poetry soon!

¢À(OYP)¢À
¢¾¢¾www.youngpoetess.com¢¾¢¾

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