Open Poetry #38 |
Yeti |
aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
He comes out at night No one speaks above a whisper Furtive glances to the shadows dancing on the snow As the night fire spirals higher Sparks flying into the darkness Embers of humanity Deep into the night they peer holding children close and tell stories of nocturnal sightings and day light foot prints that lead into the moutain side Magical, mystical man being Owner of stories and legends of lore Caught in the web of words that whisper his name. aziza |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi agian, see I did read it twice. Rick |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...sounds like someone I wanna meet LOL |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Everyone hunts the Abominable Snowman, Yeti can't be found..... Ow, sorry! Couldn't resist! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yeti?...it's big, fat, hairy....I'll bet it's really Balladeer.... Very good write [This message has been edited by Toerag (07-28-2006 10:41 AM).] |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
I'll read any poem titled, "Yeti." You did a good job too. Ed I'm not smart, I'm just a tricky dumb person. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love it! Write on! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
M A G I C A L ! ! For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Embers of humanity Deep into the night they peer holding children close and tell stories of nocturnal sightings and day light foot prints mysterious and interesting read...you captured the essense of Yetti... thank you |
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