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My Five Senses
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My Five Senses |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
My Five Senses I taste words I feel them on my lips caressing the soft skin with a well-placed syllable They lay on my tongue satiating me as they tantalize teasing, beckoning me I see words When I close my eyes they are there painting a picture in my mind The arc of the wave the blazing sun as it torches the clouds searing, scorching me I hear words They are a song in my mind a haunting lulliby which fills my soul with life Swooshing and swirling as they dance to the song they wrote soothing, enticing me I smell words They fill me with the memories of chocolate ice cream cones and toasted cheese sandwiches Comforting me from the storms of my dreams blanketing me in warm aromas calling, saturating me Ifeel words on the tip of my tongue and fingers swirling and bubbling into sentences speaking my thoughts They are the magic from deep within setting me free teasing, luring me aziza |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
outstanding! what a fantastic piece! I wish I had written it LOL |
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elisalie16 Member
since 2006-07-12
Posts 118new jersey |
brilliant job describing the magic of words, using such a beautiful combination of them, aziza! --anne |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Very much enjoyed my friend, gotta love those words. Sincerely Rick |
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