Open Poetry #38 |
by the old fountain |
Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
by the old fountain my coin fell short I searched among the flowers and weeds until the darkness came |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I been looking for a long time, Ed ... I think by now my quarter has changed to Two Cents! Enjoyed the wisdom in this ... thanks! Ct |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RatMan~ I smile in admiring recognition of the talent you possess~ It is so good to see you ... I'd throw a coin or two into your well-of-wishing knowing that you'd do your darndest to make my wish come true~ *HUGE HEART HUGLETS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed....Sad....It may be that someone will pick it up one day that really needs it. That is my wish. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I'll have to admit, that is the most likely outcome. I was wondering, what would be the result if you tossed your coin and missed the whole fountain? Would you be risking the chance that your wish would come anti-true? ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
lol Ed, mine misses the fountain more often than it hits and someone always picks it up, hopefully puts it to good use though more often than not it may go for a candy bar or soda rather than to a truly hungry mouth |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Even as the futility and loss of this pull at my heart... I feel a smile lurking because my aim is so lousy I have to just close my eyes and hope the coin hits the fountain... looking only lets me know I missed. *G* For the known misses... I always harbor hopes that someone found the coin... and perhaps made a wish less selfish than mine would have been. *S* |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
The only reoccurring "lack" in my life is the fact that I always seem a little "short". Wishing fountains have never been a disappointment. ::smiles:: regardless... Great write ! |
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