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Innately Internal [word focus internal] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Innately Internal let me in, let me out I have me now some patience, bought and paid for inherently as central most normal is what I came for instinct fails me fail me not! for what I need is touch internally I look within for there I need it much born was I of commonness and find that less is more privately I seek inside what I've been looking for and if I have that sense in … … here … then why can't I find it there…out there… accustomed is my interior and inborn is my central control but I have yet to accustom me to that beyond my whole so am I the failure that cannot be the soul of my own mate? am I so fundamentally wrong in this, my own mistake? instinct prevails then comes common sense and then comes sense of no regard and while I dream of high on high I sit thoughtfully gathering up my own shards and private, private I keep my thoughts inherent in my dreams for this 'tis immanent that I find internal seams to question my normality and quell my internal bleed for what I think is natural could be called crucial need instinctively I reach for touch is that then asking for too much? Perhaps not when I all knowingly reach externally and find myself within the you of me… ~*~ original 01.13.01 Repost 07.27.06 because " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This hit me, but in a good way.....I enjoyed reading your thoughts.....and it made me think too.  sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie Did you know that a term used in floral design classes and by the best floral designers, is "less is more"? That's because the results is, like you, from simple to profound. The touch you long for I understand, take my hand, you touched me with this poem!  |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A very clever and brilliant poem here karilea, may i thank you very much for it..thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I too enjoyed your thoughts, Karilea, penned so very well. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
instinctively I reach for touch is that then asking for too much? Perhaps not when I all knowingly reach externally and find myself within the you of me… Less is just less, I'm afraid.... ...but while I'm told by some that we must all walk separately like so many wolves in a pack, with none of that "within" stuff....I don't believe it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Looking for external validation is so dangerous. Some times it just doesn't happen. Quite the soul shattering, destructive reverse. So when it happens, accept it, believe it, and treasure it! Because you are truly wonderful, in your being, in your thoughts, and with the beauty in your poems. Wonderful write! Shenachie |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
THIS ONE.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a keeperthanks for reposting |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
so am I the failure that cannot be the soul of my own mate? am I so fundamentally wrong in this, my own mistake? The entire poem is fantastic... but these lines echo in my heart as questions asked, answers feared. *S* |
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