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Moral Ecstasy
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Moral Ecstasy |
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Wilga Junior Member
since 2006-07-25
Posts 22 |
Forming words, that will never be heard Staining my lips, my call unanswered I live my life, hidden by life's moral rights Nothing about me will glitter or excite Normal, caring, comfortable and nice How wonderful it is to be so concise Sheltered from abandonment and love I am looked down from the mortals above No chains bind my soul, no thorns in my side And yet, in that chasm, I am trapped and abide Always the wooer, but never the beau Love and its companions will always be my foe Reach out for a hand that will never be there Hide it all from the publics knowing glare Physically aroused in twilight and dark Emotions that are felt, but never will spark Hidden away, they say, for our own protection We live our lives, by our own option Fleetingly passing, a furtive glance Never seen as a candidate for romance View it rightly or wrongly, I will no longer plea For I dwell in my shell in my own moral ecstasy Wilga |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
The Third stanza and the last line in this really got to me.. I can't believe no one has yet commented to this. GREAT JOB!! I loved this. I'm not sure if I've read much of yours but this is great. I can't wait to read more.. ~heather~ Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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Wilga Junior Member
since 2006-07-25
Posts 22 |
Thanks Heather, really appreciate the comments. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is a beautiful write, a heartbeat in words...heard, believe me, heard loud and clear. You've let the soul free in this. Thank you so very much, for letting me know you have read some of my posts. I hope they have been worth the time and emotions spent in reading them. Welcome to poetry in the blue. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was absolute honesty this is a magnificant poem thank you for sharing |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Can I have more please  Amazing stuff...like an addiction...If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...James |
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the concrete rose Junior Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 33 |
The real beauty of Writing is your soul and emotion that goes in to crafting a jungle of words in to a terrific thing to read. It looks like thought went in to this, and for one to not see it means they see nothing. |
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