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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2006-07-24 10:02 PM

Kept In Hiding

The clouds cape sunset in mysterious color schemes
Cooling comes with the winds, drink for the delicate grass
Settled down among them, I too am watered

The vernacular of nature’s cues, and coos
Billow forth without resentment or ferocity
Miming the feelings that float inside this weather worn purse

Where I collect and store safely the parts I left out
Letting them grow and deepen, ripening to sweetness
Too, are thirsty for a taste of rain, relishing the same

Each, donned candy stripe, to melt upon the tongue
How could I tell you, you have been the only one?
Or all I want, especially in views of orchid June

Or the white dress that hung in my cedar mind
It never seemed to be a conversation had in time
But when we spoke, I held the reign’s emotions choke

Although you knew that I loved only you

Copyright Kkh 7/24/06

the quell
Member

since 2006-07-19

Posts 144
Liverpool, UK

1 posted 2006-07-24 10:12 PM

Beautiful...the language you used gave the poem a gorgeous kind of delicacy.

Where black, bleeding roses await the Thirteen,
I see not the stars, but the darkness between

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-07-24 10:23 PM

indeed beautiful

always love reading you

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

3 posted 2006-07-24 10:52 PM

Touches the heart from the first line, to the very last.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-07-24 11:17 PM

Lovely TD.

I love this gem:

"Or the white dress that hung in my cedar mind"

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2006-07-25 09:15 PM

Love the title, content and all of this..

very intriguing..

warmhrt
Senior Member

since 1999-12-18

Posts 1563

6 posted 2006-07-25 09:18 PM

I love the wording, the imagery you present here. Very well done..a wonderful read.

Kris

"It is wisdom to know others;
It is enlightenment to know one's self" - Lao Tzu

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2006-07-26 04:38 PM

The clouds cape sunset in mysterious color schemes
Cooling comes with the winds, drink for the delicate grass
Settled down among them, I too am watered

Very nice TD.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

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