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Billy_tha_Kidd Junior Member
since 2006-07-17
Posts 27Indiana USA |
He wandered in off a morning ledge, sat down beside me and asked, "Do you believe in time?" I told him that I believed in time for coffee, sex and late night snacks, but, I didn't believe in clocks. "Good!", he replied, "then you won't mind if I take your skillet-handled screamers and your carpet-sided countenance with me when I go?" I told him, "as long as you close the door whenever you leave, you may take anything except the rose or the raven." The door closed, and was immediately replaced by a 'No u turns allowed," sign, so, I guess he's gone for good. Yet, at times, I'm not so sure! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I love this! Welcome to Pip! :: does a U-Turn on the way out! :: |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I told him that I believed in time for coffee, sex and late night snacks, but, I didn't believe in clocks." Yes sir. You got it down. Welcome. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
lol, I guess you kept the raven and the rose what an enjoyable ponderful write welcome to these passionate poetry pages |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to you and your talent TD |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Well Done and welcome to PIP. I am fairly new here and everyone has treated me great! Can't wait for more of ur work!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a smiling write! Grinning all the way here.. humor and wisdom. Can't beat the combination. Will look forward to more of your poetry. Please, check your Email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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elisalie16 Member
since 2006-07-12
Posts 118new jersey |
your writing is simply wonderful, and i enjoy it very very much |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Great writing. I am so glad to read it and I turn green with envy because I am an incurable clock watcher. I like the way that you think. Welcome to Pip! Shenachie |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! I so much enjoyed your entrance post.  I can't wait to see more of your work. |
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warmhrt Senior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563 |
Your fist two lines just grabbed me, took me through the rest of the poem, which I thoroughly enjoyed. You have talent. Welcome, Kris "It is wisdom to know others; |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
I've read this 3 times, and with each re-read, like it better, and better. |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Welcome to the FUN... |
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