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themute
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Maryland

0 posted 2006-07-24 05:38 PM



I am slowly loosing grips upon which things were making sense
No longer do the senses make a sense to me inside my mind
I am not who I am as whom I was before
But a falsehood and a trick that this trickster fools my eyes
With all the false realities that make this universe I see
With every feeling and each second pass me by
I sense the senses are but lies that false existence realized
Now so my mind is not but nil and nor my senses or my time
I am not a one a being in a bed of senses but an idea in ones head
Non-existent and not ready to be made from nonsense upon this world is founded  
If I be a thinker when thoughts are not a thing
Then let those gasps of clinging reach a ledge from which I stand
Hope to never fall again and hope to find a way to top the mountain
A search for perfect expression of the mind I’m losing
Fingers stopping if there is such a thing

I am the two-toed wanderer

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2006-07-24 06:08 PM


Your mind works just fine I would say.

"To be or not to be ...".

Your philosophical ponderings are well expressed.

Love,
Margherita

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2006-07-24 07:35 PM


relax
enjoy the journey
the pathway is meandering
even the huge boulders are climbable
it matters not
if you reach
someone else's peak

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