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Open Poetry #38

monastic lucidity

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-07-24 10:11 AM

mania morning
vanilla walls of glass
undulations are lovely
when the wind comes
in violent throws

and messes up the leaves
of proper forests
in their ball gowns
and gloves
with broken heals

wasting rivers
hurrying to some pretend
where an ocean is glutton
for more wet than swallowed
and carried in handfuls

and then there are your eyes
with the amber sounds
I love the quiet surround
of your screaming mention
control dispursed

in panting lucubration

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daark

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

1 posted 2006-07-24 10:57 AM

I like "vanilla walls of glss"

nice.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2006-07-24 11:13 AM

and I like

...and then there are your eyes
with the amber sounds
I love the quiet surround...

~*~

Only you do surround sound
so much better.

Well done, Sir.

Mania mornings
seem to be your calling.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-07-24 06:30 PM

and I love...

"and messes up the leaves
of proper forests
in their ball gowns
and gloves
with broken heals"

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2006-07-24 06:40 PM

thanks to ya bel1e, for the eyes

_____________

ms sun, bless you lady friend

_________________

lady one, ruined high heals
are my favorites too
thanks for the eye touch

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