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Open Poetry #38
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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
0 posted 2006-07-24 02:38 AM

under the cloak of darkness
my thoughts wander down paths
my mind can barely follow
rabbit warrens and tunnels of ideas
snaking through each other
weaving a spell that lifts me
and covers me
under the cloak of darkness

aziza
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Billy_tha_Kidd
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since 2006-07-17
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1 posted 2006-07-24 02:55 AM

Cool!
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2006-07-24 07:11 AM

I second that "cool"
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2006-07-24 04:26 PM

"under the cloak of darkness
my thoughts wander down paths"

Me, too

M
Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
4 posted 2006-07-24 07:51 PM

Could I borrow it my friend, sounds like an adventure I would enjoy. Great read, thanks for sharing aziza. Be well and take care.

Sincerely
Rick
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