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Molecular Chemistry
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Molecular Chemistry |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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My eyes bleed. Oozing tears of red damnation. My veins run with dark lost contemplation. I’ve turned in circles looking for you. Busy with pondering self-hatred. You have disappeared. Scouting the dank air for a particle of what you think you should be. A forever-elusive molecule that doesn’t really exist. I wonder if you can feel the desperate longing as I cry for you. Scream at the injustice of stubborn thought that won’t leave and doesn’t make sense. I’m scared. You aren’t going to return from no where and everywhere in your mind. I’m shaking. Knowing you can’t see me when you're blind. knowing you can’t hear me above the self-recriminating voices in your head. ---------------------------- Molecular chemistry deals with the laws governing the interaction between molecules that results in the formation and breakage of chemical bonds. ---Wikipedia |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Oh ! Me likes ! Wonderful write ! ::smiles:: :: bows :: |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a great write Susan,... good to read you again~~ "I’ve turned in circles looking for you...A forever-elusive molecule that doesn’t really exist." I combined these two for they have great meaning to me.  M |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you both very much.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Regardless of: Molecular Chemistry... Energy in the system... Desire(s)... Tears... Thoughts.... Bonds... Reactions... Wants... Needs... Entropy always wins in the end. |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
A trully strong poem from a very tallented writer. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
there's some out there that you just cant touch sad to say all we could do is say a prayer |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you INclan and Inked One.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" ~Unknown~ |
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