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Open Poetry #38

Poem From a Four Year Old

XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

0 posted 2006-07-25 07:47 PM

     Bunnies
      ****

Cupid Payne
was the bunny's name

He petted reindeer
and after that
He got a hat
from a witch.

Then the bunny fell in a ditch.

He shot his pop-gun up in the air.
Someone shot him dead.
He got back up, headed to the drawer
and put a plate on his head.

He got an ashtray
and burned himself up.

Then he ate a candy bar.

He ate it up and spit it out
Then drove off in his truck.

He stomped on someone's foot.
It was the witch again.

The witch killed the bunny
Which wasn't very funny.

He got an alligator's nose
The gator bit the bunny's toes

He loved himself.
And thought it was funny.

The alligator's nose was runny.

He got a flashlight and candle
so he could see.

In the dark he found a bee.

When the bee was dead
a lightening bug
grew inside him.

Cupid loved him so much
Hearts came out of him.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2006-07-25 07:50 PM

a delightful read Larry.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-07-25 10:14 PM

Sweet, Uriah!
You make a great 4 year old.

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

3 posted 2006-07-25 10:18 PM

The perfect poem to start my night time reading.

aziza

WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

4 posted 2006-07-25 10:35 PM

This was a delightful read!!!!!!!!! You really have a way with words!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2006-07-26 11:41 AM

awwwww
I loved this
thank you so much for sharing

James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

6 posted 2006-07-28 09:07 AM

I wanna be like you when I grow up!

~~J

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

7 posted 2006-07-28 10:42 AM

That's better than my stuff...(okay, everything's better than my stuff).....enjoyed the write

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

8 posted 2006-07-28 04:03 PM

And another smile after reading this and Toerag's poem. Need them tonight - thanks.

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