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Under A Starry Sky
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Under A Starry Sky |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan 
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under a starry sky ...pt.2 the sun set before us six walkers on foot excitement in the air and smells of wonder a positive energy circulating warm glows found after dusk the music sang to us as we danced again and talked about anything it was golden when you spoke and told me where you were from how different our homelands are crossing all barriers we found ground a safe place to speak peace and of what really matters chocolate is what i forgot to have on hand next time i will have the best I walked beside you for a night and wished it was forever if i had known the night before when we met, i would have danced then too in the midnight hours with friends ones from afar .... under an almost full moon guessing when it would be there was magic from everyone and it glowed bright i can see it now even though it is in the past until we meet again Isis may you be loved JDW III 07/2006 In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Wolfie... Good to read you again! This is a wonderful piece full of great imagery. Well done! Hugs~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hey Doc~ this is one of the best poems I've read on here in a while....full of wonderful emotion, and the images are so vivid...and look at you, with your new pic!!....hugssss you....   always thrilled to read ya..... And so it those we live with |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"if i had known the night before when we met, i would have danced then too" but she left you dancing in wonderful memories |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
thanks sooo much !!!! hugs for all  , i ll try and stop in sooner than later , peace and passion to u all . ... JIn his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
I like how you quote Tolkien. Only the coolest people I know quote him. Cheers - Ed I'm not smart, I'm just a tricky dumb person. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
haha the coolest !! now u sayin that is cool lol, he is the man ... how he came up with all of the middle earth, and from his own adventures those books were wrote ... much was about and from the war he was in the world war ...and the bonding of friends while in combat, and the shire of home and the duty that rested so heavy on his shoulders, and of the ring and the fire of which it was forged. but much came after those books, many more he wrote anyways a great man and good fellow he was and will always be ... and thank your for the kind hearted comment my good sir ... Jw In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv [This message has been edited by aujussy wolf (07-22-2006 05:05 PM).] |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
they need a smiley with a jaw that drops to the floor or something with hearts for eyes lol...woah..why am I reading all these love poems..makes me miss love..makes me want love..but hey it doesn't exist..only in faerie tales...or as far as I am concerned.. If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
very nice~ I like this very much. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
thanks for reading !!! and for the comments too : ) glad u liked In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
V , ahh thank your for the time to read and comment also how nice of ya =) ~ jw In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv |
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