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poettothecars
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0 posted 2006-07-22 02:17 AM


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Happiness to Prize
21 July 2006

Unable to know
if this was God’s love
Trapped within reason and hope
alone to consider tomorrow

Yet alone to feel empty inside
her gift, her happiness to prize
Across a planet of salutation
no remorse for sins forgiven

A plural feeling acknowledged
as unto goodwill to ponder
Just to touch what was real
her eyes so willing to learn

When time has no mercy
to those downtrodden in heart
As close to salvation as forgiveness
nevertheless far from reaching out


“Let thy mercies come also unto me, O LORD, even thy salvation,
according to thy word. Let, I pray thee, thy merciful kindness be
for my comfort, according to thy word unto thy servant. Let thy
tender mercies come unto me, that I may live: for thy law is my
delight. Look thou upon me, and be merciful unto me, as thou
usest to do unto those that love thy name. Great are thy tender
mercies, O LORD: quicken me according to thy judgments.”
Psalms 119: 41, 76-77, 124, 132, 156 KJV


© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

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© Copyright 2006 Christopher W Herbert - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-07-22 05:21 PM


love the new pic
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2006-07-22 05:28 PM


Very nicely penned.
I too love the new pic!

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

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Gaia
3 posted 2006-07-22 05:36 PM


your best penning
a wonderful write

poettothecars
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4 posted 2006-07-22 06:20 PM


the photograph was of me at my mother's funeral in March 06, in speaking about the life of my mother. I got the picture off a DVD I have of the funeral proceedings

As for the poem, there are two sides to every story, and one is in Canada and I live in New Zealand

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