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Nothing Left Of Me
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Nothing Left Of Me |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia 
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A glistening star was lost today, A heart has slowly vanished The memory became to hard to bear, for what we had was more than fear You were my sight You were my soul, You were the love that held me so. Take my tired wings, Rest my tired soul Let me die the way he did, Drown me in a hole. Don’t make me an angel, Let me go to hell Let me suffer like he did, Then you can pay as well. I’m longing for the end Watch the pain drown my eyes because there is nothing left of me & brand new day will never make this end. |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland |
well done I am the two-toed wanderer |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Sad, so sad. |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
I guess this is one of the saddest poems i have ever wrote. Early this year i was faced with the loss of a loved one, he ment everything to me and today is the first time i have been able to share with anbody the way i felt. But i can say now that i have moved on and life seems to be back on track once again. |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
writing is such good therapy I'm glad you could share I do the same thing, I hoard them until whatever is bothering me is over, then share them ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this hit home |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
I am glad you've moved on... pfew... the poem was so sad.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Personally, I know that writing it out does help. Especially sharing here at Passions. Everyone is very caring and helpful. Heart hugs to you~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, writing out such sadness has a healing power to it... and we, the ones left behind, who know this very ache are the very same who reach out to you...with understanding. Be well...and write on. " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Achingly sad, Jessica. Thank you for sharing. |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Thankyou everyone, for your kind words. It is always appriciated. |
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