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Danie Franklin
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since 2005-12-05
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0 posted 2006-07-20 12:08 PM


You got angry one night,
it hurt is all I said,
we hadn't even had a fight.
there laying on the bed.

I looked at your face,
it looked like a mask,
I thought you'd flipped your case.
I said,"I just asked."

Move or I will leave,
is what you said,
I just couldnt believe.
you told me we would wed.

Now I hear you say,
I thought we'd talked about that,
before you said you felt the same way.
now you treat me like a nat.

So, goodbye for now,
you'll see someday,
He'll meet you somhow,
to see the true you and say
goodbye Dad, I didn't need you anyhow.

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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1 posted 2006-07-20 01:50 AM


children need both parents but seems these days they are having to do without one or the other and sometimes both

sad, sad stuff here

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