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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-07-19 07:17 AM


the hammering of bells
morning is too heavy now
for the clouds she slippers

but her bosom is a sky
with a million days to feed
and admiration from man

is her perfume scent derge
wafting strums across horizons
slender fingering with fat hands

the hammering of bells
morning is an empty glass now
hollow full of sun

holding her hands over ears
lest they taste the yellow
and know her souls weep

for the longer sounds of dark
______________

daark

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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-07-19 07:41 AM



There is hunger,
and there is the feeding...
the bells simply remind us
of all that once was.

Well done, Sir...
always a wonderful morning read.


LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-07-19 10:33 AM


God, you had me with each sentence, could taste, touch and feel, and the bells were so loud????

Noise really hurts my ears....

Loved this, felt it through and through




The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
3 posted 2006-07-20 01:30 AM




Extraordinary, Stranger.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2006-07-20 08:11 AM


thank you ladies
for the eyes
watching this sinful morning

each of you bless me

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