»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #38
»
Frannys Day Will Come
| Open Poetry #38 |
|
Frannys Day Will Come |
|
|
TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569
|
Franny takes the wash out, and hangs it on the line. Factories in the background but her lungs are doing fine. Stares up at a bright blue sky she knew another day. Hanging sheets & pillowcases, bleach takes out the clay. Sinatra on the radio and money in a jar, One day she's going to Hollywood so she can be a star. Momma thinks that she should stay and Dad says she can go. But Daddy had a lot to drink, his words they come out slow. The war is nearly over & the men are coming back. Franny wants to see the shore, her bags already packed. So every day the laundry comes & she will scrub them clean. Put her nickles in the jar, so she can live her dream. |
||
| © Copyright 2006 Tina Trivett - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
:: smiles :: Again, I like. I think you have a fan here. |
||
|
TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Aziza...thanks...*blush*  |
||
|
divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
make that 2 fans .. awesome penning! ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enjoyed the read/story here... very well done! Hugs~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
||
|
TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Thanks all. I think this was one of my favorites to write. |
||
|
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
You've got a major fan here too, Tina. I like the tales you tell. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
