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Open Poetry #38

The Force of You

BeautifullyBroken84
Junior Member

since 2005-11-16

Posts 11
Minnesota, USA

0 posted 2006-07-16 12:52 PM

I don’t know what it is
about you
that attracts me so deeply…
perhaps it is your
eyes
that speak right to my
heart ,
or your warm gentle touch
that releases a million
butterflies into my
soul.
Or perhaps it is the
rhythm, the
melody
of your innocent, yet
contagious laughter
that brings me to
smile.
Whatever it is,
you make me feel
weak,
vulnerable…
an overwhelming, uncontrollable
force
that is uncomfortable, yet
compelling,
captivating,
pulling me ever so closer.
Whenever you are near
I lose grasp of
wrong and right
and get completely
lost
in you
I know I should
let go, move on…but I
can’t
And I don’t know whether what’s
keeping me here is
my owl foolish stubbornness…or
fate.

~* I write the waves of my emotions, with my pen as my ship and my heart as my compass *~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2006-07-16 01:25 PM

BeautifullyBroken84
Maybe a little of both, enjoyed the write.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-07-16 05:03 PM

Beautiful, Rachel, and I love that ending.

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