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Open Poetry #38

NEVER EVERLAND..(with CTOWEN)

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2006-07-13 10:03 PM

Trapped
amid dusk and dawn
the grey suffocates.

You   slip off
in misbegotten stars
and the last blooms
of April;

and I fear ...
if we are so doomed
as we are liberated.

Falling short
of heaven's sent
such the heaviness
sets   and holds
a misforgotten light.

The burn swallows this night
everafter ...

that which never was
a comet's tale,
just a random ember
straining midair,
seeking reignition
against
what is no longer there,

but under the cover
of Dawn's blinding light,

a wishful thought
going nowhere..

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-14-2006 08:27 AM).]

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2006-07-14 12:20 PM

Interesting theme, excellent delivery.
Two esteemed poets, in one brilliance.
TD

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2006-07-14 11:26 AM

nice you two

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

3 posted 2006-07-15 09:40 AM

Thank you ladies for the read,
   I was happy for INK to ask me to write with her
      and very pleased with her insight and our outcome.

           I would suggest to anyone to write with her,
             it would be quite enjoyable!!

    Thanks again!   Ct

In rhythms to a rise the days shall follow ... each Yesterday, each Tomorrow. - Ct/05

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2006-07-15 05:54 PM

good read

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

5 posted 2006-07-20 11:28 PM

very nice colaboration indeed

Hollow heroes seperate as they run...Shadows linger in your pain dead and done

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