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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2006-07-13 10:03 PM





  
Trapped
amid dusk and dawn
the grey suffocates.

You   slip off
in misbegotten stars
and the last blooms
of April;

and I fear ...
if we are so doomed
as we are liberated.

Falling short
of heaven's sent
such the heaviness
sets   and holds
a misforgotten light.

The burn swallows this night
everafter ...

that which never was
a comet's tale,
just a random ember
straining midair,
seeking reignition
against
what is no longer there,

but under the cover
of Dawn's blinding light,

a wishful thought
going nowhere..





[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-14-2006 08:27 AM).]

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2006-07-14 12:20 PM


Interesting theme, excellent delivery.
Two esteemed poets, in one brilliance.
TD

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2006-07-14 11:26 AM


nice you two

ctowen
Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
3 posted 2006-07-15 09:40 AM


Thank you ladies for the read,
   I was happy for INK to ask me to write with her
      and very pleased with her insight and our outcome.

           I would suggest to anyone to write with her,
             it would be quite enjoyable!!

    Thanks again!   Ct

In rhythms to a rise the days shall follow ... each Yesterday, each Tomorrow.   -  Ct/05

              

vandana
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
4 posted 2006-07-15 05:54 PM


good read
Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
5 posted 2006-07-20 11:28 PM


very nice colaboration indeed

Hollow heroes seperate as they run...Shadows linger in your pain dead and done

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