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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
candles lit and burning bright flickering like stars in the dark of night sending healing powers far over the land sent with a faith i don't always understand so many people filled with hope and love thoughts of wellness and faith from above prayers fall like raindrops over the ill and candles burn like stars on the window sill aziza |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I love the feeling of this and empathise with it completely. My favourite line is: "sent with a faith i don't always understand" as I realise on reading it, that I also don't always understand my faith, and that it doesn't matter - that is why, I suppose, it called faith, rather than belief. - Owl |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I think you are write. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I really value your thoughts. aziza |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
you always say so much with so little, you amaze me  my insanely long poetry sometimes pales in comparison to your 4 or 5 lines I love that about you ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love candles so I knew I'd love this poem! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
:: Laughs when i see i wrote 'write' instead of 'right' :: Thank you for the comments. What a great way to wake up in the morning. Sheli, your poetry is uniquely you -- sometimes I have such poetry envy and think, "I want to write that!" I love how candles are used to send out messages of healing. I had never heard that until I came on line. aziza |
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howardtsu Senior Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 678 |
i liked this it has a soothing effect |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
lol zi .. that poetry envy goes both ways, I see your few lines and wish I could cram so much into so little (it would sure help my carpal tunnel LOL) my mom always did say that i'm long winded though *grins* you are sublime perfection and I am your #1 fan  *blows kisses* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...I usually burn them on my breakfast bar...James |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you for reading and responding to this poem. It means a lot to me. aziza |
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David D Jerald Member
since 2006-08-07
Posts 74Tucson, Arizona |
Ah aziza now that was beautiful truly so. You did good. Keep on writing. Dave |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
I, too, admire the fortunate aspect of saying so much with so few words, as I tend to be too wordy. Nice thought and poem. Rae |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you. You make me smile. aziza |
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