Open Poetry #38 |
Fly |
aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Fly You can fly among the tree tops and soar among the trees. You need no halo to be an angel, Don't you really see? You bring me joy, you make me smile You share your heart with love You brighten up my darkest days radiating sunlight from above. You can fly among the mountains and glide along the lands. The only thing that truly matters is the love you cradle in your hands. aziza |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
precious |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
So true we can take flights anywhere with loving hearts to share Hope |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I really like folks who write of love Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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David D Jerald Member
since 2006-08-07
Posts 74Tucson, Arizona |
Dear Aziza, Your poem is born of hope that love never dies. It is a nice poem. But when love dies and it will ..hang on cause your going to go crashing into the ground. You did good though I still liked it. Dave |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you all for enjoying my thoughts . David, I have crashed before, but I refuse to quit flying. aziza |
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