Open Poetry #38 |
shevietown cocoa's |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I didn't think to count the quarters back then that you gave me back as change for a dollar’s worth of your cocoa candy nor did I notice too that your cocoas weren't new but had been unwrapped by someone else's hurry but were put back nearly perfect and I didn't realize before the purchase that you were the kind of girl that would taste each one to pick her favorites and that you would smile if I did too so it seems we both agreed on the darker ones with the richest cream in squirtable centers __________________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-08-2006 08:35 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You and your candies... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS I love dark chocolate!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, do they make you hungry too? thanks lady friend ______________ ms martie, we should sample some, soon. thanks for the read hon |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
a dollar's worth of cocoa candy can't be much Stranger.... you need to visit that candy shop again |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Whether dark or light is of no mind to me, it is the insides that counts. Truth be told, I prefer caramel, as they tend to stick around longer. Take it for what it's worth |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
perfection |
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Beau de L'air Member
since 2006-08-03
Posts 105Middlesex, England |
A confection of wit and style. You keep surprising me. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady one, I shall continue to be a patron sort of addicting I think, thank you ms _____________ ms sera, your choice does sound inviting also, I guess I would be tempted with such, thank you for your review. _______________ ms leej, thank you candy smile'd friend ______________ B'dL, humble thanks for the review |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
am addicted to the candies with the creamy centers...the dark ones..... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Damn, I LOVE this......when I grow up I want to write like you Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I just love the poem and I just love how the words flow. And I just love candy! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thanks hon, yes I do detect a sweet tooth. _____________ ms honey, don't grow up, just write like you and we will all come read you, thanks hon _______________ ms az, thanks lady friend...did you notice the plate on the limo?..cndyman? |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
mmm dark chocolates with creamy centers are the bestest ... I just poke a hole in the bottom of them with my pinky though, so not many notice that I've been picking out the best ones ... 'cause really, who looks at the bottoms? loved this, DS Sheli (chocoholic) By words the mind is winged |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sheli, bad puppy!!! oh well ok..thanks hon |
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