navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #38 » shevietown cocoa's
Open Poetry #38
Post A Reply Post New Topic shevietown cocoa's Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-08-08 07:52 AM


I didn't think to count
the quarters back then
that you gave me back as change
for a dollar’s worth
of your cocoa candy

nor did I notice too
that your cocoas weren't new
but had been unwrapped
by someone else's hurry
but were put back nearly

perfect and I didn't realize
before the purchase
that you were the kind of girl
that would taste each one
to pick her favorites

and that you would smile
if I did too
so it seems we both agreed
on the darker ones
with the richest cream

in squirtable centers
__________________

daark




[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-08-2006 08:35 AM).]

© Copyright 2006 ©Dark 2k - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-08-08 09:27 AM



You and your candies...




Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
2 posted 2006-08-08 10:01 AM


DS  I love dark chocolate!!
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2006-08-08 10:53 AM


ms sun, do they make you hungry too?  thanks lady friend

______________

ms martie, we should sample some, soon. thanks for the read hon

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
4 posted 2006-08-08 12:56 PM




a dollar's worth
of cocoa candy
can't be much Stranger....

you need to visit that
candy shop again


seraphin
Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004
Michigan
5 posted 2006-08-08 01:13 PM


Whether dark or light is of no mind to me,
it is the insides that counts. Truth be told, I prefer caramel, as they tend to stick around longer. Take it for what it's worth

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

6 posted 2006-08-08 01:41 PM


perfection
Beau de L'air
Member
since 2006-08-03
Posts 105
Middlesex, England
7 posted 2006-08-08 01:47 PM


A confection of wit and style.  You keep surprising me.
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
8 posted 2006-08-08 02:00 PM


lady one, I shall continue to be a patron sort of addicting I think, thank you ms

_____________
ms sera, your choice does sound inviting also, I guess I would be tempted with such, thank you for your review.

_______________
ms leej, thank you candy smile'd friend

______________

B'dL, humble thanks for the review

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

9 posted 2006-08-09 09:59 AM


am addicted to the candies with the creamy centers...the dark ones.....  
Honeybee
Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
10 posted 2006-08-10 08:47 PM



Damn, I LOVE this......when I grow up I want to write like you

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

aziza
Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
11 posted 2006-08-11 12:22 PM


I just love the poem
and I just love how the words flow.  
And I just love candy!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
12 posted 2006-08-11 07:22 AM


ms gs, thanks hon, yes I do detect a sweet tooth.

_____________

ms honey, don't grow up, just write like you and we will all come read you, thanks hon

_______________

ms az, thanks lady friend...did you notice the plate on the limo?..cndyman?

divine chaos
Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon
13 posted 2006-08-11 08:11 AM


mmm dark chocolates with creamy centers are the bestest ... I just poke a hole in the bottom of them with my pinky though, so not many notice that I've been picking out the best ones ... 'cause really, who looks at the bottoms?

loved this, DS

Sheli (chocoholic)

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
14 posted 2006-08-11 09:43 AM


ms sheli, bad puppy!!! oh well ok..thanks hon
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #38 » shevietown cocoa's

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary