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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-07-11 03:26 PM



The not-significant, significant other
wonders the affections sought
while in the black and white of it
there is a rainbow edge of evermore
in morning afterthoughts
that steal the moments
rambling in the unknown.

Tomorrow's today is seen through better eyes
caught in second skins where promises
are just reflections of want by design
and the soft-touch thoughts
are in the distance, still
but because you are you
the feelings behind these words
quiet the forgotten
and surrender me
to the land of between

mulching the words, sealing the truth
of sheer ponderings
suiting my day by flirting
with tomorrow...
coming full circle knowing
I am unwrapped for all to see
naked thoughts of you...
and the gift of words for me~~

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2006-07-11 05:27 PM


"suiting my day by flirting
with tomorrow..."

I have decided that flirting with tomorrow is much healthier than mourning the death of yesterday.

Loved this--love you.

and hey? You've got mail!




SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
2 posted 2006-07-11 07:26 PM


Beautiful Maureen!
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3 posted 2006-07-11 09:22 PM


You pulled out a few stops on this one M.
Excellent write!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2006-07-11 09:35 PM


"I am unwrapped for all to see
naked thoughts of you...
and the gift of words for me~~"

Excellent Maureen!!
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2006-07-12 09:46 AM


wow
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